100 Word Wednesday – Bikurgurl

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A friend in need
Diane’s right, it’s lonely on that ranch by Alpine Springs.
She couldn’t ride in her condition; on the trail rounding up wild shorthorns around Badger Creek.
It sure broke my heart to see her cry when we lost our unborn.
Where the hell was I when she needed me!
Two weeks, branding them darn bullocks.
Burned my heart beyond despair as she told me, her pretty face all gutted up.
She’s a tough one, still I guess we need to mourn.
Tobacco Joe handed me one of his retriever pups.
Hope Diane’s still home and not left for Denver.
The use of first person POV makes this piece so powerful and poignant. Great interpretation of the prompt!
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Nicely delivered last line which captures the understated emotion in this piece.
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Such a fine gritty story in a few brief lines! A perfect picture as well. Awesome!
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This has an excellent voice, James.
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Such a gritty tale – believable. Love the puppy picture – antidote to grit !
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