Marcel Loves Christine

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Warning, sinister tone.

Marcel Loves Christine.

Marcel watched Christine from his vantage point. He slammed his binoculars into his backpack. Tears welled, he pinched his nose to check his anger as revenge rattled down his spine.

Forgiveness for Christine, but the man must be eliminated. He means nothing and like the others will die.

Previous girls squirmed and bled, because they wouldn’t love him.

Marcel craved Christine.

He watches and stalks, close, behind her in the bus, in the supermarket aisle. He smells her and urges to stroke her body, to drink in her aura. Marcel is convinced she loves him, but she doesn’t know; YET!. 

24 responses to “Marcel Loves Christine

  1. Sinister stuff, James

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  2. Eeeek – scary (did you mean aurora by the way or aura?)

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  3. Creepy guy, chilling story.

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  4. Yeeks. There’s no ending here which ends happily for Christine. Nice one!

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  5. I love a scary little tale like this one to begin and brighten my day!

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  6. That last paragraph made me think of the book/movie “Perfume”
    There can be no happy ending for Christine, I fear. Good sinister writing, sir!

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  7. Yep, that’s a stalker for you.

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  8. Wowza, poor gal!!

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  9. Truly creepy, fizzing with malevolent energy- loved the line ‘revenge rattled down his spine’. Stalking on super-drive. Good story.

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  10. Chilling. Great read.

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  11. Fascinating. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀

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  12. The final line sums up just how creepy he is. Poor Christine!

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  13. Very graphic descriptive take on a really dangerous personality. Great.

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  14. Marcel the menace. A real chiller/thriller here, James. Well done.

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  15. Very creepy. If this is his love, I don’t want to see his hatred…

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  16. Yikes! Doesn’t sound like love.I think eventually he will make her pay once he realises she doesn’t love him either, (once she knows he exists that is).

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  17. Oh good grief! Someone please warn Christine!

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  18. Disturbing read – but very well done!

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