Marcel Loves Christine

Posted on 07 April 2018 | 24 Comments

Friday Fictioneers

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Warning, sinister tone.

Marcel Loves Christine.

Marcel watched Christine from his vantage point. He slammed his binoculars into his backpack. Tears welled, he pinched his nose to check his anger as revenge rattled down his spine.

Forgiveness for Christine, but the man must be eliminated. He means nothing and like the others will die.

Previous girls squirmed and bled, because they wouldn’t love him.

Marcel craved Christine.

He watches and stalks, close, behind her in the bus, in the supermarket aisle. He smells her and urges to stroke her body, to drink in her aura. Marcel is convinced she loves him, but she doesn’t know; YET!. 

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24 responses to “Marcel Loves Christine”

  1. neilmacdon | 07 April 2018 at 12:35 pm | Reply

    Sinister stuff, James

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  3. Diane | 07 April 2018 at 1:41 pm | Reply

    Eeeek – scary (did you mean aurora by the way or aura?)

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  4. Iain Kelly | 07 April 2018 at 3:25 pm | Reply

    Creepy guy, chilling story.

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  5. draliman | 07 April 2018 at 4:35 pm | Reply

    Yeeks. There’s no ending here which ends happily for Christine. Nice one!

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  6. June Griffin | 07 April 2018 at 5:12 pm | Reply

    I love a scary little tale like this one to begin and brighten my day!

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  7. Dale | 07 April 2018 at 5:29 pm | Reply

    That last paragraph made me think of the book/movie “Perfume”
    There can be no happy ending for Christine, I fear. Good sinister writing, sir!

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  8. Alice Audrey | 07 April 2018 at 5:30 pm | Reply

    Yep, that’s a stalker for you.

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  9. tintins | 07 April 2018 at 5:34 pm | Reply

    Wowza, poor gal!!

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  10. Woman walking Max | 07 April 2018 at 5:37 pm | Reply

    Truly creepy, fizzing with malevolent energy- loved the line ‘revenge rattled down his spine’. Stalking on super-drive. Good story.

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  11. lisarey1990 | 07 April 2018 at 8:52 pm | Reply

    Chilling. Great read.

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  12. dornahainds | 07 April 2018 at 11:04 pm | Reply

    Fascinating. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀

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  13. magarisa | 08 April 2018 at 8:53 am | Reply

    The final line sums up just how creepy he is. Poor Christine!

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  14. jillyfunnell | 08 April 2018 at 2:23 pm | Reply

    Very graphic descriptive take on a really dangerous personality. Great.

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  15. Russell Gayer | 08 April 2018 at 7:10 pm | Reply

    Marcel the menace. A real chiller/thriller here, James. Well done.

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  16. gahlearner | 08 April 2018 at 10:31 pm | Reply

    Very creepy. If this is his love, I don’t want to see his hatred…

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  17. Fatima Fakier | 09 April 2018 at 2:36 pm | Reply

    Yikes! Doesn’t sound like love.I think eventually he will make her pay once he realises she doesn’t love him either, (once she knows he exists that is).

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  18. granonine | 10 April 2018 at 5:45 pm | Reply

    Oh good grief! Someone please warn Christine!

    Liked by 1 person

  19. Dahlia | 11 April 2018 at 2:36 pm | Reply

    Disturbing read – but very well done!

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