Friday Fictioneers.
This week’s picture prompt of a rotting tree stump (provided by Sandra Crook) made me think of orchards and how , at one time, they were the life and soul of many villages along the Clyde valley. An industry that is rooted in the past. However, commercial decline is not the only reason that villages are torn apart–look around the world today.
I have based my story on experiences from Bosnia.
The usual mix of contributions by other members of the group can be found here.
Photo Prompt By Sandra Crook
Our World our Village
As you stare across the wasteland, you can see there was a village here; once.
Point down the valley where the trees were, and people nod and look away.
We remember childhoods learning together and laughing in the classrooms.
In the autumn, families congregated in the orchards, in the wood mills, and harvested the crops.
We were an entwined community of good neighbours, innocent lovers, and with marriages of everlasting bonds.
The fanatical nationalists terrorised us with a medieval past, infesting our streets with their hateful ethnic cleansing.
Today, we stand in silence, holding hands in remembrance of our roots.
It has always fascinated me to understand how and in what circumstances good ordinary people can be persuaded to turn on their neighbours because they’re “other”.
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Nationalism, one word. The most amazing part is that once peace is restored the International community go after the leaders for war crimes. surely war in itself is a crime and the politicians should hang their heads in shame.
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The biggest crime that these politicians should be held liable for is for bring out the worst in seemingly ordinary people !
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So true.
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I find it absolutely baffling. Unfortunately I’m seeing it around me far more than I’d ever imagined.
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So sad that such a lovely community was destroyed. Great take, James
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Thank you.
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The sense of community was so much stronger once. Sad that it is a rarity now.
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Once we depended on and trusted our neighbours and I still do in many ways. Thanks.
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That is great. Now, it is more difficult as both sides have to be willing and often, it is not the case.
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They say time heals–until the next time unfortunately. Sorry, feeling a bit serious these days. thanks for reading.
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There are days like that, James. Don’t apologise!
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Great story, strong memories and emotions for the survivors looking down on what was once their home.
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True story. Thanks.
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A moving and important story, hope and community versus extremism. Very timely.
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Things change over time, and not always for the better. A poignant piece indeed James.
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A lot of family and community activities were placed by the old tree.
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politics: we can’t live with it and can’t live without it either.
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Your story moved me almost to tears, James. You are right – nationalism is a curse.
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Yes, I’m sorry if this upset you. In such situations there are two sides pointing the finger, blaming each other, and from the outside it does not make any sense. Thank you for reading.
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Don’t be sorry. Please don’t be sorry. It’s the events that hurt, not the story. The tears are a measure of your success as a writer in telling the story. I wish everybody would weep over your story and change their ways to peace.
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Heartbreaking. Beautifully written.
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Thank you.
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This is such an excellent, important, heart-breaking story. Moderation isn’t known any longer, everything has to be extreme. Community feeling and traditiones are a great thing, but with the wrong leaders and ideas quickly turn into ostracizing the ‘Other’ and nationalism rears its ugly head. And no one, no community seems immune to it, either as victim or offender. Will it ever change?
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I suspect not, yet the idealists expect their version to be the only way–frailty living in the past.
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Dear James,
Sad story with the clang of truth to it. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Progress, or “progress”, will not be denied even when it should be.
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It seems we never learn, heavy sigh. It’s good to remember our roots. Hopefully, there is a way to rebuild what once was. Very well written, James. So much emotion.
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Such a sad ending to a terrible tale. Nicely written
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History keeps repeating itself… *sigh*
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