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This week’s photo-prompt of a rusted grill in front of a door has sinister implications for me.
Charming Tatiana
Tatiana is beautiful only at night, since the sunlight burns her skin.
In the Brecht Bar, her melancholy melodies inflame the passion in the minds of lustful drunks.
It is with these hypnotic charms she turns strangers into raging rampant beasts, who with a puckered invitation follow into the dark alley.
There, Tatiana embraces their aroma of sweaty testosterone and clasps her mouth on their neck, and sucks to leave a hickey.
Strangers disappear every week.
The rusted grill protects Tatiana, so she may sleep throughout the day. She does not fear the garlic breathed villagers who carry sharpened stakes.
People will begin to notice
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They already know.
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i don’t doubt for a second that vampires still exist. they’re destined to live forever.
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I hope they are all as beautiful as Tatiana.
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Hope I don’t run into her.
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Stay sober, you’ll be fine. Thank you.
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Never was a big fan of garlic breath myself.
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Or pointed sticks. Thank you.
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Delving into the unknown.
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She’s a bit of a minx!
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Yes, and a blood sucking one at that. Thank you.
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I expect I would fall for her wiles and disappear 😮
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Surely not!
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“puckered invitation” is a great term. Aha in your story the gate keeps the villagers out, and in mine it keeps the monsters out.
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Vampire do not like being disturbed by cold callers.
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🙂
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I think I’ve met her. Well done, James.
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You met her! And you are still alive! Thanks.
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🙂 I think so.
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Ooooo creepy story. She sounds like she is no victim that’s for sure. Her hunting ground may eventually get down but I think she will take care of herself quite well
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A long lost sister of a Vampire clan. Thanks.
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I like the description in this story. ‘Garlic breathed’ is good; ‘Sweaty testosterone’ is particularly graphic. I can imagine Tatiana’s clients all too clearly!
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Thanks Penny, I am not sure if I would venture into a dark alley with her.
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A creepy vampire tale described so well, James! I really enjoyed it.
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Thank you Brenda.
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Some really good images here. She’s a clever vampire – she chooses drunks to entice and attack. Easy pickings.
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Best not to upset the women folk in the village and leave their men alone, if she wants a peaceful life. Thanks.
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Dear James,
Tatiana sounds like quite the threat. Blood curdling vampire tale. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Many thanks, I am not sure if Vampire stories are still in fashion, but I wanted to add something different to our weekly collection.
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Wonderfully Gothic, I love the details of Tatiana’s nocternal activities, she seems to be thriving on her diet of blood. !
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Thank you.
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