This week’s Friday Fictioneers prompt by Rochelle is an abandoned building that may have once been a lively place. Read more contributions HERE.

Children’s Lives Matter
Her dream for this ruin was a restaurant as a picturesque stop on the journey into the mountains. Marlene squeezed my hand.
Derelict! My heart sunk like my bank balance flushing down the drain. This renovation project was Marlene’s childhood dream. A notion she started in the school playground, gazing at the view of the surrounding rocky peaks.
She led me through the burnt-out shell, and I heard children laughing and singing.
Marlene sang along, with tears rolling down her cheeks.
Let’s not do this, I shook my head.
Yes! I want a memorial, she said. To remember my dead classmates.
A haunted restaurant! There has to be money in that!
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I suspect there were many restaurants that seemed like haunted ghost halls over the last few years. Thank you.
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Dear James,
A tragic reality for some. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you. I have been very busy with relatives visiting from Australia, and so I just rushed this story out.
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A poignant piece indeed James. Hopefully, her dream came true.
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I like how you’ve picked up on that sentence among the graffiti, and the dialogue works well to show the feelings and relationship of the two characters. Sad story.
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Thank you Margret, I am behind on commenting this week on the wide range of the group’s stories.
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I didn’t even see that line blended in with the rest of the graffiti. Good find and use of the line.
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I am not sure why the building is still standing or what the original purpose was. It appears to be from a forgotten era.
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I was not expecting that ending. Hoping that when it is complete he will feel differently.
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The ending adds a different dimension to the story. Thank you.
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You’re welcome.
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Wow James. Very dark…
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Dark days looming over Europe. Thanks.
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That was touching. I feel this story could be expanded upon.
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Oh this holds a lot if emotion. A dream job as a memorial but renovations never go smoothly or cheaply. I can see this going badly if he already wants out and they haven’t started yet.
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A tough negotiation ahead, I think.
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