Forked Tongue
The good people at Literally Stories have picked my contribution – Forked Tongue – as their Sunday read. They have included some background information on what inspired me to write the story from my time living in Berlin.
Please read the story here: Literally Stories – Forked Tongue – James McEwan
Let the Literally Stories team know if you enjoyed the reading experience by leaving a brief comment on their page.
Many thanks to Leila Allison for selecting my work as a re-read on their site.
I really liked this story, James, and so glad that Literally Stories posted it again. Good job!
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Many thanks.
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Great post 😊
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Great atmosphere, dialogue and suspense. I thought you did a good job incorporating German phrases into the dialogue, as they added to the story’s authenticity.
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Thanks, pleased you got the atmosphere.
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I enjoyed the story; especially the suspense! Congratulations!
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I am pleased I entertained you, thank you.
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Very cool James
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Congratulations. Awesome all round!
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I felt drawn in by this story, full of ambiance and I think the German conversations worked well.
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Thank you. I am aware that using foreign languages in my fiction is tricky. I try to keep it obvious and simple so as not to push the reader away.
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